This is for [livejournal.com profile] raphe1, if she likes it and can think of a titel...

Jack used to love three things: the sun, the sea and his ship. There was nothing he wanted more than for them to be the whole of his world: his breath, his meat, his drink - especially hís drink, for Jack was a thirsty man, and piracy is thirsty work.

But you cannot drink the sea - it is too vast to ever be emptied, even by old gods caught up in drinking contests, and it is too salty, far, far too salty to quench any man´s thirst. And if you try it any way you´ll most likely drown.

Nor can you drink the sun - not as liquid to pour down your throat, at least. Your skin can drink it, and Jack would walk naked as often as he could, partaking of Helios´ generous libations. But when all was said and done drinking the sun only left you even thirstier.

And the Black Pearl was by far too hard, too physical to be drinkable. Even the tar that would drip from her planks on a hot day (and in the Caribbean most days are hot) could not be drunk - nor could the freedom she embodied, for freedom flies on the wind and can never be caught, never put in a cup...

And so Jack turned to rum, a liquid as strong as the sea herself, golden as only the sun could otherwise be (at least when the rum was good) and as full of the promise of freedom (albeit of a different kind) as the Pearl herself.

Thus did Jack acquire his fourth love, and now he is sitting in an old and decrepit inn, looking over a mug of it at the man across from him (not in his uniform at the moment, though you can still tell that he wears one most days) looking suspiciously at the mug in front of him, and Jack cannot help but wonder if he might have found the fifth...?


From: [identity profile] hippediva.livejournal.com


Oh this was just wonderful! Great descriptions, and enough lovely humour to get Jack's slightly sideways way of looking at things. I totally enjoyed it! Thanks for sharing!

From: [identity profile] raphe1.livejournal.com


GEEEZE! How did I miss this??? Sigh. Pretty, pretty imagery. I love all the ways he can't drink what he loves (if that makes sense) and so finds rum and maybe James. A title huh? Let me think on it. Thank you for the story though. *GLOMP*

From: [identity profile] oneiriad.livejournal.com


You are welcome - just glad you liked it. And I would like a title, yes - poor thing looks so naked without one, don´t you think?

From: [identity profile] raphe1.livejournal.com


Errrm, "Love, Love All Around and Not a Drop to Drink"?

- adapted from the rhyme of the Ancient Mariner . . . Kinda long - I will think some more . .. . wheels grinding

From: [identity profile] oneiriad.livejournal.com


Nothing wrong with length... actually, I think it has a certain ring to it :-)

From: [identity profile] drbillbongo.livejournal.com


I already read it last night but for unknown reasons I was incapable of writing a comment. I wanted to make up for that this morning, but after re-reading your ficlet I was lost for words again.

I'm really impressed. I didn't think that there can be so much in such a small ficlet! Guess you just explained why Jack is a pirate. ;)

From: [identity profile] oneiriad.livejournal.com


It´s very nice to know that you liked my ficlet - mind you, I am not particularly skilled at expressing my gratitude, so I will settle for a thank you. :-)

From: [identity profile] bleu-marine.livejournal.com


Gorgeous! Thanks for sharing this. I especially love the possible fifth one... *sighs happily*

From: [identity profile] oneiriad.livejournal.com


Thank you for liking :-)
Ah, and I wonder, who might the fifth be ;-)

From: [identity profile] kingsleygirl.livejournal.com


I love it! The ending is definitely sweet. :D

From: [identity profile] axmxz.livejournal.com


Yey, finally an update!!!!!! More more more more more!!
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