"jack made catcalls and threw nuts at the poor people, while James rolled his eyes at his antics."
That's Jack to a tee. A very well written story, i like how you started it. A sad ending but methinks that their relationship would end sadly, they are at two ends of the world neither would willingly give up all that they had achieved.
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Date: 2005-06-04 10:01 pm (UTC)That's Jack to a tee. A very well written story, i like how you started it. A sad ending but methinks that their relationship would end sadly, they are at two ends of the world neither would willingly give up all that they had achieved.
Very good story, I enjoyed it, write more!